This poem felt peaceful and contemplative. I was particularly struck by the connection between water, light, sound, and affection, how the visible and invisible parts of experience shape one another. The ending leaves a comforting sense of moving forward together through life's depths and toward calmer shores.
This poem felt peaceful and contemplative. I was particularly struck by the connection between water, light, sound, and affection, how the visible and invisible parts of experience shape one another. The ending leaves a comforting sense of moving forward together through life's depths and toward calmer shores.
The water imagery throughout this was really strong. It felt calm but emotional at the same time.