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Henry ❤️'s avatar

This poem felt peaceful and contemplative. I was particularly struck by the connection between water, light, sound, and affection, how the visible and invisible parts of experience shape one another. The ending leaves a comforting sense of moving forward together through life's depths and toward calmer shores.

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The water imagery throughout this was really strong. It felt calm but emotional at the same time.

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