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V. Walker | Poet's avatar

This is a fun piece! Much of what I read is pretty dark, so this was a nice change.

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Jordan River's avatar

I love the internal rhymes on this one. One comment on presentation: back off the mic! :) You need to mix your volume down just a little and allow the depth of your voice to carry.

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