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This one made me smile. I love how you captured the way two people can seem completely different on the surface yet fit together so naturally. The skating and boarding imagery gave the poem such a playful, carefree energy, and the ocean breeze felt like the perfect backdrop for their connection. “One’s head matches the other’s feet” is a line that will stay with me, it says so much in so few words. Beautifully written.

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