This feels quietly cinematic. The way the poem moves from a crowded street into something deeply personal makes it feel like a memory unfolding in real time. Really enjoyed the softness and imagery in this one.
Thank you Tracy. Attraction and recognition can go hand-in-hand. I’d like to think this poem describes a couple who instantly understood on a deeper level they could see each other inside and out and what they stood for with a moment of genuine intuition.
All your post is reminding me of somethings
This is where my eye met you…..I think it’s deep
Thank you Bryan!
This is where my eyes met you 😻
Street Sparks finds me, so impressive. I love it
Thank you Joyce!
This feels quietly cinematic. The way the poem moves from a crowded street into something deeply personal makes it feel like a memory unfolding in real time. Really enjoyed the softness and imagery in this one.
Thank you Priscilla! I really like how the focus of this poem narrows the further along it gets.
Thank you Tracy. Attraction and recognition can go hand-in-hand. I’d like to think this poem describes a couple who instantly understood on a deeper level they could see each other inside and out and what they stood for with a moment of genuine intuition.