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> Grant, I love the parallel between the fading studio and the artist's changing skin. The imagery is haunting yet hopeful, and the ending beautifully transforms imperfection into renewal. Well written.

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This poem carries a quiet sadness, but also a sense of acceptance that feels very human. The studio itself almost feels alive, like it has absorbed the history of every artist who passed through it. I especially appreciated how the ending turns closure into something hopeful, suggesting that endings can also become beginnings.

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