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Quilty's avatar

This poem reminds me that the strongest connections don't depend on perfect visibility or certainty. The blend of cycling, weather, and romance creates a journey that feels both physical and emotional. A lovely read.

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What stayed with me was the inversion of direction, usually we need light to find our way, but here love becomes the compass. The line “I don’t have to see your silhouette to know the way” transforms the ride from a physical journey into something almost spiritual. The image of warmth lifting the cyclists above the storms below felt especially original.

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